potk 
Super Moderator/One-Shoe Guru
Registration Date: 04-05-2011
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 Review: Vanishing Shoes Triangle |
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WARNING: THIS REVIEW CONTAINS SPOILERS FOR THE MYSTERY OF THE MISSING SHOES TRIANGLE.
(Even though I'm not a really big fan of tickling, I bought the Extended Cut of "The Mystery of the Vanishing Shoes Triangle" just to support fantomaZ and his fantastic work. 
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The build-up and payoff in this e-comic was great; I also loved Sylvie's creativity with not only making a deal with the stewardesses, but how she tricked willingly "lost" her boot to keep the scam going. My favourite character was definitely Hana; I loved her pink pantyhose and super-classy pumps not to mention that she had without-a-doubt the best reaction to her missing shoe, actually crawling on her knees looking for it. Hana pretty much made the comic for me. I also loved Sundari's stockings as well; just the right colour to compliment her skin. 
If there was one thing I wasn't particularly fond of in this comic was Sylvie's monologues; I thought that they stood otu a bit too much and hearing her gab kind of brought the suspense down a bit. Maybe it's just me, but I don't really like a lot of dialogue in these kind of stories, where the characters bodies and expressions should do most of the talking. mostly because I'm terrible at writing it. 
I'll definitely be picking up the sequel when it comes out. 
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