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Kindred
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This sort of got out of hand, (30 pages) but rather than chop it into three parts, I left it as one big story. Hope everyone likes it, please feel free to comment.

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Great story! Very original concept. Would definitely like to see more done with those grin shoes. It seems like they're a curse when worn, but when removed it's many times worse. Imagine Andrea having to wear them without straps! Also loved the scene where Yasmine lost her flats. Did she have to go home without them?

Is Siobhan still in the model catalogue? I couldn't seem to find her, but I think I remember seeing that name in there at one point.
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Judge Melinda and Siobahn were characters I came up with, in Siobahn's case, I didn't see a model with that name and I wanted a model type Irish girl from Ireland and I love the name Siobahn.

In the case of Judge Melinda Belanger, I wanted a tough judge type with a extremely naughty side.

Thanks for reading,

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what a story! you really developed the leprechaun/magic theme into something epic. very well done. I love the dialogues of the leprechauns. much better old irish touch than I was able to create. thank you Smile
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Thanks Fantomaz, I picture the leprechauns as a couple of outcasts from Ireland who have found a wonderful and playful home in NyLondon. They are, in a sense, completely devoted to one another and that makes the dialogue a little easier to write. Great characters.

Thanks for the comments,

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Greatest story ever! Can't wait to see what you come up with next!
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Greatest story ever! Can't wait to see what you come up with next!


Neither can I Sheer. Tell you the truth, I've been trying to formulate a new story and I haven't come up with anything yet, but I'll keep thinking. Maybe a crime drama.

Thanks for reading,

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Dying in anticipation for your next story!
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had to read this one again for st. pat's day!
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