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Here's a story I worked up over the last couple of days. First time posting a story here, enjoy guys. All comments are welcome.

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Excellent story. Really want to see what happens when they get Nadja's house.
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thank you Smile

indeed very nice and fitting smoothly into the NyLondon universe. introducing Liz in a way exactly how I envisioned her ...
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Fantomaz, I'm really glad the story works for you. I like when whatever I contribute works with the "canon" of NyLondon.

Mandrake, I got to around 9 pages and I realized I had a good ending point. I want to keep going, but my first attempt at part 2, in my opinion, was getting too wordy without enough action. When I hit page three and all the women still had their shoes on, I decided to hold off until I got inspired. Any suggestions? Feel free to PM if you have anything.

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Fantastic story and great character interaction. A very enjoyable read, I'm looking forward eagerly to the next chapter.

Thanks for posting it Smile
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The saying 'NyLondon has it now' is genius! Big Grin Five stars!

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I just found this post! Please tell me there there's part 2, 3, 4, 10! Lol! Please continue!
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Originally posted by sheertorture
I just found this post! Please tell me there there's part 2, 3, 4, 10! Lol! Please continue!


Part II is available here... http://www.web-base.at/vlibrary/fantomaz...readid=152</a>

I have Part III nearly finished and that will be it for this particular Friday night... I have ideas for a few more stories along the same lines that evolve from the stories, just have to find the time to sit down and write.

Thanks for the interest and enthusiasm.

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Hope you didn't forget about the new story!
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Hope you didn't forget about the new story!


No... Just trying to figure the ending while my job got a little busier. The last one is coming.

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