potk
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Registration Date: 04-05-2011
Posts: 359
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Short Story: The Cat's Out Of The Bag |
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The Cat's Out Of The Bag
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Starring: Dona Carla, Portia.
Location: Italian Restaurant
Scenario: Dona Carla is summoned by a mysterious benefactor who is willing to do anything to get information out of her...
Tags: One Shoe Off, Restrained Tickling, F/F Tickling, Shoe Stealing |
Talk about taking a break!
It's been a good 1-2 months since my last short story, and I've gone a little bit off the rails in terms of my schedule. I was originally going to hva The Snake-Charming Cinderella be uploaded first, but In got stuck in a rut/wrote myself into a corner wih that one. I then started writing Nightmare in Nylons - Chapter 2, which I will upload next and got distracted along the way. Sorry for taking so long!
Back when fantomaZ started showing off some models, omega and I had a conversation ala PMs about different ideas on how these new (and even some older) models can lose a shoe, as omeg came to me saying he wanted to start writing short stories. This short story is one of the first ideas I came up with during that conversation, and thought it would be interesting enough to make into a short story. This will be my first short story using any of the new NyLondon citizens, and it probably won't be the last.
As with all of my previous short stories, this one has an open-ending and will have the option for a sequel if I ever want to come back to this story.
Hope you enjoy it! Next up: Nightmare in Nylons - Chapter 2: Ice Cream, You Scream
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04-26-2012 00:00 |
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Mandrake
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Registration Date: 03-03-2010
Posts: 1,002
Location: NY
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Great job with the story. I was wondering who'd have the guts to deshoe and tickle Donna Carla. Makes perfect sense who it would be. Nice build up to it as well, very suspenseful. Reminds me that I have a chapter partway finished that needs some work. I think your story will motivate me to finish it up and post it soon.
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04-27-2012 03:12 |
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fantomaZ
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Registration Date: 03-02-2010
Posts: 403
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oh, I didn't think someone would go after Donna Carla so quickly. she's the toughest one in whole NyLondon ... if we don't count in the supernatural villains. Portia is possibly the only one who could pull such a thing through ...
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05-03-2012 11:04 |
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