 Short Story: Nightmare in Nylons - Chapter 1 |
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Nightmare in Nylons - Chapter 1: Skeleton in the Closet
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Starring: Sophie, Hatice, ????
Location: Abandoned Motel Room.
Scenario: Sophie and Hatice have to stay in a creepy motel after losing a bet, and end up losing more then they thought they would...
Tags: Shoe Loss, One Shoe Off |
Alright, time for my second short story. I originally planned on having this finished around the end of last week, but I took Mandrake's advice and took a bit of a break so to replenish my creative energy.
As stated earlier, I originally had both the action scenes and the climax originally written on paper, so I quickly jotted down an ending before typing it from the beginning. I typed it all in one go, and while it's slightly longer then I thought, it's still shorter than Shoe Theft in the Sanctuary. I also intended to have Sophie and Regina be the main pair of this chapter, but after seeing that Regina was an MQ model, I was planning on using Rain and Aislinn as the bully duo in the first chapter. I then scrapped that idea, and then found myself creating the Hatice and Sophie duo. The reason why I decided to use Hatice and Sophie was mostly becuase I thought it'd be interesting to see the two of them work together, especially after what happened in the Stupid Bet saga.
As for what they're wearing, Sophie is wearing the exact same thing she is wearing in Stupid Bet: Challenges (the story can actually tie into the e-comic itself; I actually reference it), mainly becuase I know how many people, including me, love her cowboy boots. How she got them back, I don't know. 
Hatice is wearing a nice red sweater, long black pants, and casual heels with ankle straps (the straps are actually rather important).
The story itself is actually based off of the climax of a book I read in my childhood called The Skeleton Man, although slightly altered a bit.
The next chapter in the Nightmare in Nylons saga will be called Ice Cream, You Scream, with the "Swedish Ice Cream" herself, Britta in the starring role. Who is the mystery character? All will be revealed in due time...
Hope you guys enjoy it. Next up: Maid-in-Training!
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This post has been edited 3 time(s), it was last edited by potk: 02-16-2012 02:52.
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02-16-2012 02:47 |
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02-16-2012 11:06 |
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potk
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Thanks!
Just so you know, the girls aren't the ones saying "GIVE IT BACK!!" Those words will definitely be important in the following parts.
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Loved it! You really know how to build suspense. Great job.
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02-17-2012 03:34 |
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thanks for another great contribution 
a note about those mq-models: mq basically means that those models have less options. not such a big wardrobe, less makeup options and it's much more difficult to get their clothings and especially nylons tightly fitting in more complex poses. but some models are simply to well designed to remove them like Sophie or Canan ...
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potk
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Glad to know you liked it.
I knew that Sophie was an MQ model (you told me before), but due to the fact she wasn't in the catolouge anymore (along with Nurhan), I wasn't sure if you were ever going to use her again, so I switche her out with Hatice. I didn't know that Canan was an MQ model, though.
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Great story. I look forward to Part Two
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Really, really good, thanks for writing it!
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05-30-2012 22:14 |
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Really, really good, thanks for writing it! |
Thanks a lot and welcome to the board! I enjoyed your sprite work while it lasted.
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05-30-2012 23:54 |
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Oh my gods, I'm dumb. I've realized only now that the author was YOU ^_^'
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05-31-2012 12:47 |
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Originally posted by Carlosfonteira
Oh my gods, I'm dumb. I've realized only now that the author was YOU ^_^' |
LOL, that's OK. Hope you're ready for more, because the next chapter is almost done.
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05-31-2012 19:39 |
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Well, I'm obviously always ready for more XD
Can't wait!
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06-01-2012 00:54 |
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One of the problems with this message board is that you can't copy a large amount of text to the posts, so you always have to attach files if you want to do a story. It's one of the reasons I haven't posted my stories yet since I don't have all the files for my stories in files ready to post. When I have more time I will try to upload them.
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06-15-2012 02:28 |
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You know maybe if you ask one of the moderators tthey'll let you upload Pink Lodge here since it was well received here. |
You're right, I've just sended a request at Fantomaz himself.
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06-15-2012 20:44 |
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potk
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Since I've finally started posting again, I think it's time for a well-deserved status update.
The reason for the long delay is that I had actually lost my flash drive (again!), but just recently I had been able to find it, a good two months after I had misplaced it. Going back and reading what I had typed, I have altered both Nightmare in Nylons - Chapter 2 and The Snake-Charming Cinderella (well, what I have of them). During that period I have also come up with 3 new stories, all of which are currently in the brainstorming period:
Going back, I don't exactly have the best track record for staying on schedule, and given how things are now, I'm not entirely sure which one of these will come out first. Anyways, sorry for the delay! 
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Can't wait to read your next story, whatever it is!
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07-27-2012 10:28 |
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These ideas sound nice. Romina's holiday sound interesting because I don't see Romina in a Ball gown dress and heels.
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07-27-2012 20:28 |
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