 Thread: Possible Sequel - Hotel Coochie Coo II - The Costume Ball |
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I wanted to submit a few ideas I came up with for a hotel sequel, since I like the longer stories better, it's something I would love to see expanded.
Included are a Synopsis and minor stories that would make up the big story. I have also included cast lists of who I thought should be in the stories.
Possible story: Hotel Coochie Coo II – The Costume Ball
Synopsis: The White Feather Cat Burglar is still at large, and Detective Mei Lin is in hot water since the previous story, not only did she let the cat burglar escape, she was humiliated by her and tortured an innocent women (Guelcan) in her place. Even though Nadja “convinced†Guelcan not to press charges, Mei Lin still caught hell from her superiors and the force in general when Martina filed her report to the Nylonodon Police, which portrayed her as inept.
Martina is still fuming by being the cat burglar’s latest and greatest victim. She offers an interesting scenario to an upper level police captain. She will host a party in the Hotel Plaza’s ball room for Nylonodon’s elite. It will be a masquerade/costume ball to display a priceless piece of artwork. There is no artwork and the piece being put on display is a diamond encrusted pair of heels that are actually fakes, a secret known only to Martina and the police captain. The whole lie is leaked by police to attract the attention of the cat burglar, who Martina believes, won’t be able to resist such a prize. Lissa, will be on hand to model the shoes.
Mei Lin, not knowing it is a trap, demands to be on the security detail for the hotel and is given two officers as her assistants for the ball.
Nylonodon News is on hand to cover the ball. Shefali, the junior of the two reporters, will be outside with a camera woman. Suzanne will be on the inside with a camera person of her own, which is Portia, who as we all know, is a master of disguise and recently found herself a position at the news room where she hears of the ball and its valuable artwork display. A quick sleeping potion and Suzanne’s normal camera woman can’t be found and Portia is on her way to the ball since she fits the costume intended for the missing camera woman. (You can, if it is easier, scrap the whole masquerade/costume idea, I just thought that would be easier for Portia to disguise herself and impersonate anyone else.)
As a local celebrity, Professor Sui is invited as well as Lady Jane, Lawyer Nadja and her newest friend, Guelcan, The mayor and her daughter, Fatima, who is under the protection of the local mafia and her “bodyguards†would be in attendance as well. Since the police are hoping to trap the cat burglar, they offer tickets from all types of venues to give the cat burglar a chance to get her hands on a ticket. Because of this, almost anyone in the cast can be present. Make Hattice and Aynur be part of that cast though.
Hundreds of rooms, Martina’s office, basements, parking garages, the ball room, backstage at the ball. Virtually hundreds of possible places to trap the lovlies and make them squirm, itch, laugh or talk.
Possible stories that make up the whole book:
A. The White Feather Cat Burglar
Starring: Portia, Suzanne, Mei Lin, Martina, Police Captain, Officer 1 and Officer 2
The trap is set, Portia must get rid of Suzanne and then she can disguise herself as anyone at the ball and subdue, tickle, drug or make itch anyone in the cast as she moves through the ball gathering information and getting closer to the prize she doesn’t know is a fake.
B. The Mobster’s Revenge
Starring: Ornella, Fatima, Hattice, Aynur, Thugs and anyone else who gets in the mobs way.
One piece of the first story was that no one ever said what happened to the suitcase full of cash that was in the room with Fatima. The last persons to see it were Hattice and Aynur, Mei Lin and Portia never went back to the room. When they got tired, Hattice and Aynur just left. I believe, they took off with the cash. The mob wants their cash back and since Fatima was subjected to such cruel tickling, she is now working with the mob in full cooperation. She has spotted Hattice and Aynur previously, getting tickets to the ball and will point them out when she spots them to the thugs. The mob is going to get a little revenge.
Other motivations for the mobs presence: Unaware they are fakes, the pair of shoes being worn by a top model together would fetch a hefty ransom, the mob could also be planning a theft and kidnapping of Lissa. Maybe they are even targeting the mayor’s daughter as a potential kidnap victim. Remember the only thing better than money is more money.
C. Suzanne and Shefali at it again.
Starring: Suzanne, Shefali, Camera Woman 1, Portia, Sui
Shefali, stationed outside, is determined to get into the ball, take Suzanne down a notch or two and get revenge for Suzanne broadcasting her in Sui’s museum exhibit being tickled by Sui. Perhaps she will take Suzanne out for Portia? Itching powder, shoe stealing, costume changing, maybe a handcuff or two. Shefali’s second mission is payback on Professor Sui for her humiliation during the other story.
D. Guelcan: Revenge on Mei Lin
Starring: Guelcan, Nadja, Mei Lin
I was thinking of this as an epilouge piece. Perhaps after Portia escapes again, Mei Lin, caught at the end of the story again, but this time, in Nadja’s dungeon at Guelcan’s mercy.
E. The APW: Subterfuge
Starring: Aleshanee, Selina, Nadja, Guelcan
Generic members of the APW protest Professor Sui outside about her archaeological findings near protected monkey habitats while inside, Aleshanee and Selina have crashed the ball looking to make an example of the professor, but Aleshanee’s plans are set aside when she realizes Lawyer Nadja, (who humiliated her poolside) and a close friend (Guelcan) are in attendance.
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| Thread: Party at the Hotel Plaza! |
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Hi all,
I have checked out this site over and over again over the years and this year, with a little extra cash floating around (lucky me), I decided to buy a few of these publications.
First a little background, I'm a writer, not an artist. I can't draw to save my life. I started looking into 3D artwork because I wanted to create but I have very little talent. I figured out Daz3D on my own and worked up some talents and techniuqes and I've never figured out Poser and lighting. The small amount of creation I have been able to bring to life has improved, but I have to say, the artwork here is amazing. The subject matter is right down my alley and I have not only been impressed, but extremely happy with my purchases.
The Hotel story was just that. A great story that drew me in. From Hatice, who just wants to get through the day to Guelcan who takes a big risk and gets her payback ten fold. I was intrigued to the point where I would read it a second time and find something new. I love not only the story but the possibilities of other stories that can grow from this. I think that is what I most enjoy.
It's like when you watch a movie and you wonder, "how did they do that?" I'm very impressed and I am itching for more. (Excuse the pun, I also bought "Ticklish Newsroom Pranks")
I love Mei Lin and Portia and the dynamic they bring to the story. Portia the wily thief and Mei Lin the determined police officer. I also like Nadja, the professional lawyer on the surface and her promiscuous hidden side she only shows to those who deserve it and am very interested to see what (and who) she keeps in her dungeon.
Please keep up the great work fantomaZ!
Kindred
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