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Posted by MerpserGuy on 01-01-2023 at19:37:

  Laura Petrie Missing Shoe of The Dick Van Dyke Show

Hey guys! Do you guys remember the post on the thread One Shoe in dreams I made on this site on July 20, 2021? You guys remember?

On that thread, I told you guys that I had a dream about Laura Petrie losing a shoe on an episode of The Dick Van Dyke Show.

So I have decided to write an episode transcript of the Laura Petrie losing her right shoe on The Dick Van Dyke Show

But I?m gonna need some help. This is my first attempt of writing a script of TDVDS. I really want to have some perfect dialogue such as jokes and usual lines physical stuff and any other you guys can think of.

If any of you guys seen any of the episodes of The Dick Van Dyke Show please give me some perfect dialogue and physical stuff in my message wall.

Would it be okay if I posted the entire script here on this website?

Don?t worry it won?t be AI Generated!

I will now post a the full plot in the next post.



Posted by MerpserGuy on 01-01-2023 at19:43:

  RE: Laura Petrie Missing Shoe of The Dick Van Dyke Show

Okay! So this is the full plot of the episode I posted on the dream thread. I copied and pasted it.

The episode began with Laura Petrie (Mary Tyler Moore) talking to her friend Millie Helper (Ann Morgan Guilbert). Laura was wearing a long sleeve sweater jacket, a knee length dress, and she was wearing her black high heeled pointed toe slip on pumps.

After the opening scene, we see Laura in the kitchen setting up a ladder in the kitchen getting ready to replace a lightbulb and her son Ritchie (Larry Matthews) comes home from school from the back door. Then Laura climbs a ladder with her shoes on. As she is climbing the ladder, her right shoe falls off of her right foot, and it lands on the kitchen floor. Then we hear Laura say oh, my shoe. So now, Laura Petrie has now lost her shoe. Laura tells Ritchie to go to his room and work on his homework. Ritchie says okay and leaves the kitchen off camera. After Laura successfully changes the lightbulb, she climbs down the ladder and when she looks down on the ground and she notices that her shoe is not in the kitchen. Now, Laura has noticed that her shoe is missing. She walks out of the kitchen wearing one shoe and she is walking around the living room looking for her shoe. At one point she sees Ritchie, putting his jacket away, and she even asks Ritchie if he has seen her shoe and Ritchie said he does not know. Laura continues looking for her shoe and she puts away the ladder and the burnt light bulb she used off camera.

Then we see a random scene of Rob Petrie (Dick Van Dyke) at his work office with Sally Rogers (Rose Marie), Buddy Sorrell (Morey Amsterdam) and Mel Cooley (Richard Deacon). After that scene, Rob arrives home and he sees Laura walking into the living room. Laura is still wearing one shoe on and one shoe off and when Rob sees Laura in her one shoe state, he asks her, Honey! What happened to your shoe?. Then Laura explains to Rob how she lost her shoe and tells him she is unable to find it, and then Rob says that Laura looks beautiful wearing one shoe. At that point, Laura did her usual things all while wearing one shoe and she even says she is getting use to wearing one shoe.

At the penultimate scene of the episode, Rob and Laura goes to see Ritchie in his bedroom and they both tell him that he needs to get ready for bed soon. Then finally, Laura sees and finds her shoe sitting on his bed. As it turns out Ritchie was the one who took her shoe and had it the whole time. Ritchie grabs her shoe off the bed and Ritchie tells his parents that he took her shoe when Laura was not looking, and he said he did that to play a joke on her and he played with her shoe a little bit. Rob and Laura laughed a little about the shoe joke. Then Ritchie gave Laura her shoe back to her and Laura puts her shoe back on her right foot, wearing both shoes again.

In the final scene, Rob and Laura are in the living room talking about the one shoe state, Rob then compliments her shoes, and the he goes to the bedroom and then we see a closeup shot of her shoes. Laura smiles, walks into the bedroom, and the episode ends.

That is the full plot of the episode. Please send me some perfect dialogue jokes and other funny stuff on my message wall.



Posted by MerpserGuy on 01-05-2023 at10:18:

 

Apparently, I just now came up with a different ending for this incoming episode. Then I will take some time writing out the entire script.



Posted by MerpserGuy on 01-26-2023 at06:07:

 

Hey guys! How does March 15 sound for the release date for this episode. That is when I will have it posted.



Posted by Mandrake on 03-26-2023 at11:07:

 

Hey, I must have missed this. Definitely post it if you can.



Posted by MerpserGuy on 04-01-2023 at02:38:

 

Hey guys! I am still working on the TDVDS fan-fiction episode of Laura Petrie losing a shoe and spending a lot of hours in the house wearing one shoe when her shoe is missing.

Now all of the dialogue is completed for the script but since this is my first ever attempt in writing a script of TDVDS the dialogue I wrote has a lot of mentions of shoes which is the basis of this episode. So I wrote the dialogue out as best as I could. For those of you that has seen The Dick Van Dyke Show you will have to forgive me if you believe that there is a line that is out of character.

If you guys read the full length plot in the above post you guys might believe on where her right shoe is a spoiler alert.

Where do you guys think is the best place to post the entire script?



Posted by Mandrake on 04-01-2023 at08:01:

 

You can post it as an attachment here.



Posted by MerpserGuy on 05-15-2023 at09:15:

 

Okay guys! The Laura Petrie missing shoe episode script is finally finished.

Now! How do I post the script as an attachment.

The script is on my Pages app right now.

Please give me the steps on how to do it.



Posted by Mandrake on 05-15-2023 at15:48:

 

Save it as a text or doc file. Click reply, then click the attachments button under the message. Click "choose file" then navigate to the folder where you saved the the file and click open. Then click "submit" and it should upload the file.



Posted by MerpserGuy on 05-16-2023 at03:02:

 

Unfortunately, I accidentally lost the script. Now I do not know when I am going to have it posted.


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