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Posted by Kindred on 12-31-2012 at21:24:

  New Story: "Wearin' O' The Grin"

This sort of got out of hand, (30 pages) but rather than chop it into three parts, I left it as one big story. Hope everyone likes it, please feel free to comment.

Kindred



Posted by Mandrake on 01-01-2013 at19:35:

  RE: New Story: "Wearin' O' The Grin"

Great story! Very original concept. Would definitely like to see more done with those grin shoes. It seems like they're a curse when worn, but when removed it's many times worse. Imagine Andrea having to wear them without straps! Also loved the scene where Yasmine lost her flats. Did she have to go home without them?

Is Siobhan still in the model catalogue? I couldn't seem to find her, but I think I remember seeing that name in there at one point.



Posted by Kindred on 01-01-2013 at23:22:

 

Judge Melinda and Siobahn were characters I came up with, in Siobahn's case, I didn't see a model with that name and I wanted a model type Irish girl from Ireland and I love the name Siobahn.

In the case of Judge Melinda Belanger, I wanted a tough judge type with a extremely naughty side.

Thanks for reading,

Kindred



Posted by fantomaZ on 01-02-2013 at12:39:

 

what a story! you really developed the leprechaun/magic theme into something epic. very well done. I love the dialogues of the leprechauns. much better old irish touch than I was able to create. thank you Smile



Posted by Kindred on 01-02-2013 at19:22:

 

Thanks Fantomaz, I picture the leprechauns as a couple of outcasts from Ireland who have found a wonderful and playful home in NyLondon. They are, in a sense, completely devoted to one another and that makes the dialogue a little easier to write. Great characters.

Thanks for the comments,

Kindred



Posted by sheertorture on 01-05-2013 at05:19:

 

Greatest story ever! Can't wait to see what you come up with next!



Posted by Kindred on 01-07-2013 at21:25:

 

quote:
Originally posted by sheertorture
Greatest story ever! Can't wait to see what you come up with next!


Neither can I Sheer. Tell you the truth, I've been trying to formulate a new story and I haven't come up with anything yet, but I'll keep thinking. Maybe a crime drama.

Thanks for reading,

Kindred



Posted by sheertorture on 02-07-2013 at04:15:

 

Dying in anticipation for your next story!



Posted by sheertorture on 03-22-2013 at03:02:

 

had to read this one again for st. pat's day!


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