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Posted by Kindred on 07-10-2012 at23:21:

  Short Story: A Friday Night in NyLondon

Here's a story I worked up over the last couple of days. First time posting a story here, enjoy guys. All comments are welcome.

Kindred

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Posted by Mandrake on 07-11-2012 at03:09:

  RE: Short Story: A Friday Night in NyLondon

Excellent story. Really want to see what happens when they get Nadja's house.

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Posted by fantomaZ on 07-11-2012 at19:29:



thank you

indeed very nice and fitting smoothly into the NyLondon universe. introducing Liz in a way exactly how I envisioned her ...

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Posted by Kindred on 07-12-2012 at05:30:

 

Fantomaz, I'm really glad the story works for you. I like when whatever I contribute works with the "canon" of NyLondon.

Mandrake, I got to around 9 pages and I realized I had a good ending point. I want to keep going, but my first attempt at part 2, in my opinion, was getting too wordy without enough action. When I hit page three and all the women still had their shoes on, I decided to hold off until I got inspired. Any suggestions? Feel free to PM if you have anything.

Kindred

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Posted by Morfe22 on 07-12-2012 at22:57:

 

Fantastic story and great character interaction. A very enjoyable read, I'm looking forward eagerly to the next chapter.

Thanks for posting it

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Posted by Powell on 10-05-2012 at10:43:

 

The saying 'NyLondon has it now' is genius! Five stars!

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Posted by sheertorture on 10-27-2012 at19:13:

 

I just found this post! Please tell me there there's part 2, 3, 4, 10! Lol! Please continue!

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Posted by Kindred on 10-29-2012 at02:22:

 

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Originally posted by sheertorture I just found this post! Please tell me there there's part 2, 3, 4, 10! Lol! Please continue!

Part II is available here... http://www.web-base.at/vlibrary/fantomaz/members/content/board/thread.php?threadid=152</a>

I have Part III nearly finished and that will be it for this particular Friday night... I have ideas for a few more stories along the same lines that evolve from the stories, just have to find the time to sit down and write.

Thanks for the interest and enthusiasm.

Kindred

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Posted by sheertorture on 11-10-2012 at06:13:

 

Hope you didn't forget about the new story!

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Posted by Kindred on 11-10-2012 at17:57:

 

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Originally posted by sheertorture Hope you didn't forget about the new story!

No... Just trying to figure the ending while my job got a little busier. The last one is coming.

Kindred