bosArt | Print: Short Story: Nightmare in Nylons - Chapter 1

Posted by potk on 02-16-2012 at02:47:

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Short Story: Nightmare in Nylons - Chapter 1

Nightmare in Nylons - Chapter 1: Skeleton in the Closet

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Starring: Sophie, Hatice, ????
Location: Abandoned Motel Room.
Scenario: Sophie and Hatice have to stay in a creepy motel after losing a bet, and end up losing more then they thought they would...
Tags: Shoe Loss, One Shoe Off

Alright, time for my second short story. I originally planned on having this finished around the end of last week, but I took Mandrake's advice and took a bit of a break so to replenish my creative energy.

As stated earlier, I originally had both the action scenes and the climax originally written on paper, so I quickly jotted down an ending before typing it from the beginning. I typed it all in one go, and while it's slightly longer then I thought, it's still shorter than Shoe Theft in the Sanctuary. I also intended to have Sophie and Regina be the main pair of this chapter, but after seeing that Regina was an MQ model, I was planning on using Rain and Aislinn as the bully duo in the first chapter. I then scrapped that idea, and then found myself creating the Hatice and Sophie duo. The reason why I decided to use Hatice and Sophie was mostly becuase I thought it'd be interesting to see the two of them work together, especially after what happened in the Stupid Bet saga.

As for what they're wearing, Sophie is wearing the exact same thing she is wearing in Stupid Bet: Challenges (the story can actually tie into the e-comic itself; I actually reference it), mainly becuase I know how many people, including me, love her cowboy boots. How she got them back, I don't know. Big Grin

Hatice is wearing a nice red sweater, long black pants, and casual heels with ankle straps (the straps are actually rather important).

The story itself is actually based off of the climax of a book I read in my childhood called The Skeleton Man, although slightly altered a bit.

The next chapter in the Nightmare in Nylons saga will be called Ice Cream, You Scream, with the "Swedish Ice Cream" herself, Britta in the starring role. Who is the mystery character? All will be revealed in due time...

Hope you guys enjoy it. Next up: Maid-in-Training! Big Grin

Posted by omega on 02-16-2012 at11:06:

Great work!! I totally love it when they say "GIVE IT BACK!!" Can't wait for chapter 2. Nice homage it's nice to see people doing homages to a girl losing her shoe that isn't Cinderella.

Here's something to contribute.

You have to love high heels and grates.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YyAiRFBT4Mc&context=C3750f87ADOEgsToPDskK4HsME3GRd5M6SjkfrkmUx

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c-waLxmJY0w&feature=related

Here's Meryl Streep showing how easy high heels could come off I guess I'll use this fact to my advantage someday.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3s2D6gs1Ui0&context=C3750f87ADOEgsToPDskK4HsME3GRd5M6SjkfrkmUx

Posted by potk on 02-16-2012 at16:57:

Thanks!

Just so you know, the girls aren't the ones saying "GIVE IT BACK!!" Those words will definitely be important in the following parts.

Posted by Mandrake on 02-17-2012 at03:34:

Loved it! You really know how to build suspense. Great job.

Posted by potk on 02-17-2012 at03:41:

Thanks! Big Grin

Posted by fantomaZ on 02-17-2012 at04:49:

thanks for another great contribution Smile

a note about those mq-models: mq basically means that those models have less options. not such a big wardrobe, less makeup options and it's much more difficult to get their clothings and especially nylons tightly fitting in more complex poses. but some models are simply to well designed to remove them like Sophie or Canan ...

Posted by potk on 02-17-2012 at22:50:

Glad to know you liked it. Big Grin

I knew that Sophie was an MQ model (you told me before), but due to the fact she wasn't in the catolouge anymore (along with Nurhan), I wasn't sure if you were ever going to use her again, so I switche her out with Hatice. I didn't know that Canan was an MQ model, though.

Posted by hunter77721 on 04-08-2012 at17:12:

Great story. I look forward to Part Two

Posted by Carlosfonteira on 05-30-2012 at22:14:

Really, really good, thanks for writing it!

Posted by potk on 05-30-2012 at23:54:

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Originally posted by Carlosfonteira
Really, really good, thanks for writing it!

Thanks a lot and welcome to the board! I enjoyed your sprite work while it lasted. Big Grin

Posted by Carlosfonteira on 05-31-2012 at12:47:

Shocked

Oh my gods, I'm dumb. I've realized only now that the author was YOU ^_^'

Posted by potk on 05-31-2012 at19:39:

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Originally posted by Carlosfonteira
Oh my gods, I'm dumb. I've realized only now that the author was YOU ^_^'

LOL, that's OK. Hope you're ready for more, because the next chapter is almost done. Big Grin

Posted by Carlosfonteira on 06-01-2012 at00:54:

Big Grin

Well, I'm obviously always ready for more XD
Can't wait!

Posted by omega on 06-14-2012 at20:11:

You know maybe if you ask one of the moderators tthey'll let you upload Pink Lodge here since it was well received here.

Posted by Mandrake on 06-15-2012 at02:28:

One of the problems with this message board is that you can't copy a large amount of text to the posts, so you always have to attach files if you want to do a story. It's one of the reasons I haven't posted my stories yet since I don't have all the files for my stories in files ready to post. When I have more time I will try to upload them.

Posted by Carlosfonteira on 06-15-2012 at20:44:

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Originally posted by omega
You know maybe if you ask one of the moderators tthey'll let you upload Pink Lodge here since it was well received here.

You're right, I've just sended a request at Fantomaz himself.

Posted by potk on 07-27-2012 at07:44:

Since I've finally started posting again, I think it's time for a well-deserved status update.

The reason for the long delay is that I had actually lost my flash drive (again!), but just recently I had been able to find it, a good two months after I had misplaced it. Going back and reading what I had typed, I have altered both Nightmare in Nylons - Chapter 2 and The Snake-Charming Cinderella (well, what I have of them). During that period I have also come up with 3 new stories, all of which are currently in the brainstorming period:

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Olly Olly Oxford Free! - (Nicole, Romina) Came up with this one while I was watching some kids play; click here if you don't get what the title means.

Romina's Holiday - (Romina, Sophie, Rain) I've grown rather fond of Romina for some reason, and decided I wanted to give her a story for herself. Both the title and the story itself are a reference to an infamous shoe loss scene from a certain film... Big Grin

Flat Out Of Luck - (Nykta, Elenora, Bernadette) It was hard to pick the cast for this one, but ultimately decided on these three due to their looks and personalities. Looks like this Friday the 13th is gonna go well for these three... Evil

Going back, I don't exactly have the best track record for staying on schedule, and given how things are now, I'm not entirely sure which one of these will come out first. Anyways, sorry for the delay! Tongue